IB Film Extended Essay Exemplar

The research question is sharply focused and drives every section of the essay

Topic is communicated accurately with clear purpose and contextual grounding in film scholarship

Range of primary (scene analyses) and secondary sources is appropriate and well integrated

Methodology section could more explicitly outline the selection and application of sources

A few scene transitions lack linking language to maintain perfect coherence

Excellent and accurate use of film terminology and gender theory concepts throughout

Strong subject knowledge demonstrated by effective application of technical and theoretical constructs

Secondary sources are woven into analysis rather than merely listed, substantiating arguments

Occasional reliance on non–peer-reviewed internet essays weakens academic rigor

A few descriptive passages could be more analytical to deepen theoretical engagement

Insightful analysis links cinematography, sound, and narrative to the theme of masculinity in crisis

Research draws on a wide range of historical, psychoanalytic, and genre-theory sources, maintaining strong relevance

Discussion remains coherent with logical argument flow and effective comparisons between films

Evaluation of contrasting scholarly viewpoints is brief and could be more sustained

Some conclusions—e.g., audience impact of slow motion—are asserted rather than deeply examined

All required structural components are present: title page, word count, contents, section headings, numbered pages

Consistent formatting, captioned and referenced images, and complete bibliography enhance readability and compliance

Minor cosmetic issues such as occasional over-sized images and inconsistent hanging indents

A few long sentences could be split for improved clarity